Comments for Out of America at http://inthefray.org , comment 1 to 1 out of 1 comments http://inthefray.org Wed, 07 Jan 2009 05:54:20 +0100 FeedCreator 1.7.2 http://inthefray.org/content/view/1562/38/#comment-2442 cannot decide whether you write well. your style is unusual; your sentences not really in symmetry one with the other. at times sophisticated, at times trite.<br /><br />a calm, curious read though. its hard to tell where each sentence is going. a strange read... suprisingly full of detail and showing of great sensitivity. you are a good observer and, i think, easily identify the meaningful. simplify the writing. - Barbara Duarte Tue, 04 Jul 2006 10:24:55 +0100